2016考研英語(yǔ)：滿分作文揭秘

 　　2016考研英語(yǔ)：滿分作文揭秘

　　2016考研已進(jìn)入比較后緊鑼密鼓的沖刺階段，作文分?jǐn)?shù)作為僅次于閱讀理解的的題型，成為很多考生心頭的痛。由于不知什么樣的作文可吸引閱卷人而無(wú)法提高，本文為大家整理2014考研英語(yǔ)一大作文的滿分作文，讓廣大考生抓住復(fù)習(xí)方向!

　　This picture, which illustrates the importance of love and help between parents and children, consists of two drawings. The first drawing shows what a mother and a daughter were like 30 years ago. The second drawing , in contrast , shows what the mother and the daughter are like now. The mother was taking the daughter’s hand in the first drawing while the daughter is aiding the mother in the second.

　　第一段作者非常樸實(shí)的描寫(xiě)了圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容，沒(méi)有過(guò)難的詞匯;邏輯清晰：段落總分總，首句為主題句，二三句分述，比較后一句總結(jié)。亮點(diǎn)還在于句型多變。首句一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句添加插入結(jié)構(gòu)，三句也同樣使用插入語(yǔ)，實(shí)現(xiàn)華麗變身。本篇文章由兩圖構(gòu)成，使用的”in contrast”，”while”

　　同學(xué)們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)。

　　What is intended to show in the picture is clear: parents should help their children when the latter are young, and the children, when growing up, should take care of their parents who have by now grown old. This is what makes a family.

　　二段詳細(xì)闡釋圖畫(huà)含義：父母與子女之間應(yīng)該相攜。值得學(xué)習(xí)的地方是要變換說(shuō)法，避免單調(diào)重復(fù)。

　　Impacted by the change in lifestyles, China is witnessing some kind of disintegration or loosing of ties in family relationship。 Yet, the love between parents and children is not only eternal, but the basic component of a healthy society. Only upon the solid foundation of domestic well being can the skyscraper of social progress be built; but if that be loosening, the construction upon it, however towering and glorious, would fall inevitably into debris. Love your parents and love your children.

　　三段提出了自己的建議和評(píng)論。句型更加豐富多樣，不僅采用插入結(jié)構(gòu)(比較后一句)，首句采用過(guò)去分詞，第三句采用only半倒裝句。

　　總之，滿分作文多能夠緊扣思想，行文邏輯非常清晰，表達(dá)地道，句型結(jié)構(gòu)豐富多變。希望同學(xué)們認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)此篇滿分檔作文，爭(zhēng)取在不久的考試中拔得頭籌，取得勝利!