同等學力英語作文批改：第13期

　　同等學力英語作文原文：

　　It is no denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic today whether the people have adopted pets. In recent years ,it is reported that in increasing numbers of people adopt pets,for example,cat,dog and bird etc.however,some people maintain that limit or prohibit adopt pets.as far as I am concerned,I believe that it is a well live ways.

　　On the one hand, pest is human friend and pets is a pretty, mild animous.adopt pets add up people’s living intresting.pets and its owner are care for each other too.meanwhile,some pets can pretect it’s owner live and prospectity security.for example dog. On the other hand,pets and human share peer survival right in the earth.therefore,while the people’s have enhanced of living level since our courtry reform and opening to the outside world,we should emphasis its, one parts of the establish harmous social today.

　　As a result, it is a good live ways to adopt pets and more and more people should takd part in the groups.

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