同等學力英語作文批改：第26期

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　　Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?

　　There is no denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic in modern society whether “lucky numbers” really bring good luck. To this issue people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view. They say that lucky numbers bring good luck for them. For instance, when a person attends a examination, he considers that he should pass the exam if he sit at No.3 seat because number “3” is his lucky number.

　　As far as I am concerned, I believe that good luck has not relation to lucky numbers consequentially. Only effort of one’s own can bring good luck and good result. Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list. The best illustration might be promotion in company. One person who works hard and studies friendly with his/her colleagues gains the promotion. The same reason, a student can not pass the exam without paying effort.

　　Therefore, lucky numbers can not bring good luck. Hard working and studying do really bring good luck.

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　　文章結構合理，清晰，層次分明，語言流暢。是一篇高水平作文，但是要注意一些細節問題哦。繼續保持這樣的成績啊。