同等學力英語作文批改：第31期

　　同等學力英語作文原文：

　　Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?

　　When it comes to “lucky numbers” ,opinions  differ from person to person.Some people believe that some numbers such as “8”,“6” etc can bring good lucky .So when they get into trouble ,they believe in “lucky numbers”rather than efficient works.Some others hold the opposite view .They insist that good lucky is only for the man who has prepared for it.

　　As far as I am concerned, good lucky has no relation to the “lucky numbers”.I think that  numbers are just maths conception,and they are only used to be counted or be calculated. Numbers can not determine one’s fate. As we know, if we eager to pass the exam,we must review the lessons again and again. It is impossible for us to pass the exam if we only depend on” lucky numbers”.

　　However,just as every coin has two sides, to some extent ,lucky numbers can bring psychology balance to the people who give up all hope .I think that we should read more books and widen our view so that we can remain a optimistic attitude and  be objective to the problem.At that time ,we will feel that good lucky belongs to us naturally.

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