同等學力英語作文批改：第61期

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　　Text Message

　　Nobody can have fail to the notice of the fact that text message has become a hotly debated issue in China in the past few years. With the boom of the Chinese economy and society, an increasing number of people are possessed of owns mobile phone, meanwhile, text message has been a very popular means of exchange between person and person. however, To the issues, people’s attitude differ of sharply. Some people maintain that text message is a favorable ways, on the contrary, others believe it is a harmful ways.

　　weigh the arguments of  both sides, I am inclined to in favor of the former. there are some reasons to account for my viewpoint, but I just list a few of them. To begin with, text message is a cheap means of communication. For example, I am usually communicate with my friends through text message, owe to transmit text message only cost 0.1 Yuan RMB of each time. And more than this, text message enable to rich and colorful of people’s modern life. on the tradition Chinese festivals such as Spring day, many people are usually through text message delicate greet of each others. 
  
　　To sum up, the advantages of text message overweigh the disadvantage, when we come to text message, we should be encourage and stick to it.

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