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　　on text messaging.

　　It is known that text message has both advantages and disadvantages. Therefore, when it comes to text message, opinions differ from person to person. Some people may think it is a blessing because it facilitate people’s life, while others regard it as a hell because some crimes occur vie text message.

　　As far as I am concerned, I believe that text message is a blessing. In the first place , It is very convenient .As an additional function of a mobile phon, text message is a relatively convenient compared with a computer .You need not carry a computer at all ,however, you can put a phone in your pocket . Secondly, It is very cheap. For instance ,a piece of text message is only 0.2 yuan, while a 3 minute’s telephon call is 0.5 yuan at least . Last but not least , you can receive many interesting news or friends’  blessing through text message. It will let you feel happier both in work and life.

　　In a word , text message is a perfect illustration of the development of economy and society. Although a series of problems have arisen in the process, it is reasonable for us to believe that they can be solve in the near future with effective measures taken by both government and the public.

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　　文章結構符合題目要求，內容充實，層次清晰，但是有少量的語法錯誤，今后復習中一定要注意這些細節問題。加油啊。