同等學力英語作文批改：第67期

　　同等學力英語作文原文

　　Text message plays a very important role in the modernization or our country. Without text message, the revival of our life is just pie in the sky. However, text message is not so perfect, it just like a coin has tow face, advantages and disadvantages as well.

　　Undoubtedly, text message is of great necessity. On the one hand, text message is a good way for pepeople keeping touch with each other, On the other hand, peope received the information such as news, friends resently situation and so on. But, meanwhile text message sometimes to be send is useless, needless, even disturbed people’s life. People always hating to receive the adervertising text message.

　　From my point of view, though text message sometimes likeless, we also should adop it. The final way to improve the situation which spreading advertising text message is by government  effort controlling. Only in this way can text massage have more advantages to people.

　　評語：得分7-9分
   
　　該文寫作結構較清晰，觀點較明確，能夠大致表明寫作目的，但是語言表示比較薄弱，語言錯誤較多，需要在今后的學習中加以注意。