同等學力英語作文批改：第69期

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　　Text message

　　There is no denying the fact that text message is a hotly detated topic today .Some people think it is a blessing, while others regard it as a hell.As I see it, there is an element of truth in both views.

　　On the one hand, it brings about many benefits. Fristly, messages become more and more popular with people. They accept the convenient way of communication and some even cannot live without them. it can save time if you want to inform your friends of something in one or two words by sending a short message.Secondly, text messages cost less than making a phone call.

　　On the other hands, as every coin has two sides, text messages also have some disadvantages. Some people cheat or fool others by telling them that they have won some prizes through text messages. In addition, sometimes many unwanted and usless messages may bring their users some troubles .

　　To sum up, the next message is a two-edged sword, which brings us both advantages and disadvantages.Of course, we should not give up eating for fear of choking.The best policy , as I see it, is to take advantage of its merits and eliminate its unhealthy influence so the it can serve us in a better way.

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