同等學力英語作文批改：第73期

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　　It’s well known that text message has been in common in our society. But it also puzzle people nowadays. People hold different views about text message . Some people believe that it is a blessing .But other people take an opposite side. They firmly regard it as a hell. As far as I am concerned, I agree the former idea. The reasons are obviously.

　　First of all, the advantage of text message is reflected in our life details. Such as weather message, check message and so on. All of these can help us in unconscious way. Moreover, text message is a convenient and efficient way of communication for each other. Lots of student use text message to congratulate or apologize. Most important of all, the fare of text message is very cheap. Most of people can afford it.

　　In summary, text message is very important in our life. We will use it more and more in future.

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　　文章結構清晰，語言比較流暢，內容也比較充實，但是出現了個別表達不當的地方，要注意句子安排和語言表達，多看看范文，加油啊。