同等學力英語作文批改：第83期

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　　There is no denying the fact that reform of medical care is a hotly debated topic in China in recent years. Reports are often heard that many people can’t pay the high price of drugs. Many people complain that they are hard to look the doctor in hospital. Few of family drop to poor because of expensive medical price. 

　　Many reason cause the phenomenon. First ,the resoures of medical is limit. Secondly,many people trust big hospital .so, they have to take a long time to wait before they meet the doctor. With the development of the society’s economy , people care about their health more than before.

　　Government must  maximate the medical advantages and eliminate its unhealthy side-effictes. Reform  of  medical is very important .

　　Personally, I think we should exert the proper supervision over the medical so that it can benefit us a better way. In one hand, people should change the view about big hospital. In other hand, government must average the  invest of hospital.

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