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　　My View on Reform Medical Care in China

　　It is in a high supply in medical and it is difficult to see a doctor are the two important problems now exist in China. The both questions are not solved right now, most of people in China are at a loss. And want to see a doctor quickly,and want to pay less in medical.

　　The  resons  which result in the problems are include these: the first one is the hospital is not enough to pay service for so many persons in China especially in the country. the second one is that there have not enough experienced doctors in China. And most of  patients want to see a experienced doctor. They think the good doctors can supply the best services for him. And the third one is to waste too much time  to waiting in the hospital, such as  fee, check and so on.

　　In my opinion, the government must do something to change this phenomenon. Such as build more hospitals, train more doctors , and so on; and people must to change their views ,they can see any doctors if their ill is not severity.

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　　文章結構基本是按照題目要求來安排的，但是由于文中有許多語言表達錯誤和語法錯誤導致分數下降，今后復習一定要注意基本功的加強。加油啊。