同等學(xué)力英語(yǔ)作文批改：第89期

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　　There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing  trend for an increasing number of people who live in rural areas to come into and work in huge cites. Some people may claim that migrant workers bring about more and more social problem. Others ,however, hold the opposite view.

　　Personally, I agree with the statement that migrant workers have contributed greatly to the economic growth and the basic construction facilities. Without them the city could not have developed at such a rapid speed.

　　Although rural emigrants contribute greatly to the city, they may put pressure on population control and social order, and they commit crimes. It is suggested that governments ought to make efforts to reduce the gap between cities and countryside. In my view ,as long as effective measures are taken ,these problems will be solved properly and the society will be harmony .

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