同等學力英語作文批改：第17期

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　　Keeping pets

　　There is no denying the fact that keeping pets is a debated topic in recent years. Should people keep pets？Some people hold the positive view while others think differently. The opinion of mine is belongs to the lather.

　　In the first place, pets can transmit some diseases to people and give threaten to the health of people. Secondly, pets can make the noise. For example , the dog will make horrible noise when a stranger go by, especially in the night ,the dog’s noise can influence people form deep sleep. Last but not least, pets can make pollution . For example , dog or cat can always make shit in public place , even dirty the house.

　　To sum up, I think that pets will disturb people’s life, so, I stand by the opposite spot: People should not keep pets.

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