同等學力英語作文批改：第33期
來源：育路教育網
時間：2011-07-01 11:16:40
同等學力英語作文原文：
There is no denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic whether “lucky numbers” should really bring good luck in china today. People’s opinions differ sharply on this issue. Some people claim that some particular figures can bring good luck to them, such as 8,58 and 98. These numbers are some special means in Chinese. What it is used in their telephone code or car code maybe give a large number of rich to them.
As far as I am concerned, I believe that the numbers are not related to our better luck. On the one hand, the numbers are only figures. It is not contacted with our good luck in our life. On the other hand, only when we depend on our hard work can have good luck. Last, “lucky numbers” is only a means of entertainment or pastime.
To sum up, we should not go to extremes on this matter. We need not spend some time considering the problem of lucky numbers. We should work hard for our good luck.
名師點評：10—11分
文章結構比較清晰，層次分明，但是語言方面不太好，還有一些語法錯誤。另外段落的格式要注意。今后復習中一定要多注意語言方面的鞏固。加油哦。
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