同等學力英語作文批改：第39期

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　　Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?

　　Some people think that lucky numbers will bring good luck, like 6 ,8 ,9 and so on . So when they do something , they tend to select the day which contains these number to start or end . For example , the day contained 6 don’t leave home and the day contained 8 don’t go home.  What’s more , when they buy goods ,they tend to select the code which consists of these lucky numbers . For example , code of their new mobile phone or their new car .

　　I think the number isn’t related to fortune , On the contrary , I think the one recipe for good luck lies in hard study and work . That people who think lucky numbers will bring good luck are entirely cheating themselves. No pains, No gains. If you keep daydreaming you’ll never achieve anything.

　　To sum up ,  The thinking that “Lucky Numbers” can bring good luck isn’t reasonable, Good luck and success is only attained by hard study and work .

　　名師點評：10—11分

　　文章結構符合題目要求，層次清晰，語言比較流暢。但是由于出現了幾點語法錯誤以及表達欠妥當的問題導致分數有所下降。今后復習中一定要多注意這些細節的復習。加油啊，你很有潛力。