同等學力英語作文批改：第38期

　　同等學力英語作文原文

　　There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend for many people to seek for“lucky number”, they believe that the “lucky numbers” will bound to bring good lucky to them, so they would like to spend much money on “lucky numbers”.
   
　　The opinions of mine is that I do not agree with them, on the contrary, I think that “lucky numbers” irrelevant to good lucky. For the fist place, the so called “lucky numbers” are nothing but some numbers. For the second place, good lucky is based on hard working or extra payment. The last but not least, there is only happenchance if someone has some “lucky numbers” rushed into success. 

　　To sum up, I would believe that it is a mistake to believe in “lucky numbers” and “lucky numbers” do not really bring good lucky.

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