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　　My view on reform of medical care in China

　　At present, there are two important situations both medical expenses are pretty high and it is difficult to go to doctor in China. Many people may spend a lot of money in hospital while they have to go to doctor.
   
　　As far as I am concerned, there are some reasons for this phenomenon. Firstly, many medical companies raise the price of drug in order to gain immense profit. For example, a kind of price of drug in market is very high, but its production cost may very low. Secondly, it is difficult for many patients to find a good hospital. Nowadays, most hospital sets up some things for no other providing patients with better services than to how to make money. Last but not least, more and more hospital also raise various medical expense in order to create huge economic profit.
    
　　In my opinion, our government should take some effective measures to solve this problem of medical care. First, the government should adopt some rigid restrictions for the price of drug. Second, the government also should allow good doctor to establishes private clinic themselves.

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　　文章結構比較清晰，但是由于句子結構不清楚，以及語法錯誤導致分數減低，今后復習中一定要注意小知識點的鞏固。加油啊。