同等學力英語作文批改：第78期

　　同等學力英語作文原文

　　With the rapid development of economy and society, a growing number of people are arriving in big cities, such as Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou and Shenzhen etc. There is no denying the fact that increasing number of people arriving each day in cities bring about a series of problems.

　　The primary problems have emerged, such as traffic problems, housing problems, medical problems and educational problems. Thousands of people arrive in big cities, desperate for economic and educational opportunities.

　　Most immigrants come from countryside and most of them will become city dweller. They make positive contributions to cities and promote consumption, however, they also bring about a lot of problems. Personally, I believe that we should attack these problems before things get worse. First, it is essential that laws and regulations must be formulated and enforced to make the living environment of immigrants fair and reasonable. Meanwhile, city immigrants should enhance their awareness of abiding by regulations and conforming to convention of city. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to expect a brighter future.

　　點評：9分

　　文章基本沒有語法錯誤，語言流暢，但是題目要求說要些主要問題，你的第二段雖然說了主要問題，但是沒用具體分析。加油啊。