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　　My View on Reform of Medical Care in China

　　There is no denying that reform of medical care has been a hotly debated topic in China. There are many problems in medical field, such as a number of people have many difficult to see a good doctor and spend a great much money in the hospital. 
   
　　In my opinion, various factors lead to this problem, among them, they following are the most critical.  In the first place, a lot of people are more willing to a major hospital than a small hospital even if they catch small cold. A great many patients can be seen in major hospitals but contrast to the situation of small hospitals. Secondly, medical insurance system is not perfect. Not everyone have adequate insurance even today. Last but not least, there is inadequate government funding for medical care so the doctors are more concerned about the interests.     
   
　　Therefore, the government should adopt to effective measure to solve the problem. Firstly, the government should increase investment in medical care. Second, effective social health insurance should be made to every citizen.

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　　文章符合題目要求，結構安排合理，但是內容缺乏深度。出現了一些語法錯誤，希望今后復習中多注意這類細節問題。加油。