第一章 大學(xué)英語六級(jí)寫作宏觀分析
本章內(nèi)容：
一、考試時(shí)間
二、字?jǐn)?shù)要求
三、評(píng)分原則及標(biāo)準(zhǔn)下的寫作要求
一)評(píng)分原則
1. 從內(nèi)容和語言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過語言來表達(dá)。
二)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
2分：條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
5分：基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。
8分：基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
11分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。
14分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順、連貫，基本上無語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。
三)寫作要求
1、從內(nèi)容上來看，千萬不要跑題
2、語言表達(dá)重于內(nèi)容
四)提高表達(dá)能力的三個(gè)方面
四、閱卷實(shí)例及高分作文的特點(diǎn)
2008年12月六級(jí)試題
How to Improve Students’ Mental Health
1. 大學(xué)生的心理健康非常重要
2. 為此，學(xué)校可以
3. 我們自己應(yīng)當(dāng)
五、考試題型的回顧和分類(2004.1—2008.12)
一)考試題型回顧
1. (08. 12) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How to Improve Students’ Mental Health? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1. 大學(xué)生的心理健康非常重要
2. 為此，學(xué)校可以
3. 我們自己應(yīng)當(dāng)
2. (08. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.隨著信息技術(shù)的發(fā)展，電子圖書越來越多。
2.有人認(rèn)為電子圖書會(huì)取代傳統(tǒng)圖書，理由是……
3.我的看法。
3. (07. 12) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Digital Age. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.如今數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品得到越來越廣泛的使用，例如……
2.數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品的使用對(duì)人們工作、學(xué)習(xí)和生活產(chǎn)生的影響。
4. (07. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.有人做好事期望得到回報(bào);
2.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該像雷鋒那樣做好事不圖回報(bào);
3.我的觀點(diǎn)。
5. (06. 12) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.閱讀經(jīng)典書籍對(duì)人的成長至關(guān)重要;
2.現(xiàn)在愿意閱讀經(jīng)典的人卻越來越少，原因是……
3.我們大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。
6. (06. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Traveling Abroad. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.近十年來X市有越來越多的人選擇出境旅游;
2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因;
3.這種現(xiàn)象可能產(chǎn)生的影響。
7. (06. 1) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.對(duì)公司提供職位表示感謝
2.解釋為何不能接受所提供的職位
3.希望給與諒解，并表達(dá)對(duì)公司的良好祝愿
8. (05. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.目前盜版的現(xiàn)象比較嚴(yán)重;
2.造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因及其危害;
3.我們應(yīng)該怎么做。
Useful words and expressions:
盜版：piracy (n.)
盜版產(chǎn)品：pirated products
知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)：intellectual property rights
侵犯版權(quán)：infringe sb’s copyright; copyright infringement
9. (05. 1) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an open letter on behalf of the student union asking people to give help to a student who is seriously ill. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.對(duì)病人的簡單介紹：目前的病情和家庭情況;
2.目前的困難：無法繼續(xù)承擔(dān)醫(yī)療費(fèi)用，需要護(hù)理;
3.希望捐助，聯(lián)系方式。
Your Help Needed
10. (04. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the editor of a newspaper complaining about the poor service of a bookstore. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
設(shè)想你買了一本英文詞典，發(fā)現(xiàn)有這樣那樣的質(zhì)量問題，書店的服務(wù)態(tài)度又不好，因此給報(bào)社編輯寫信。信中必須包括以下內(nèi)容：
1.事情的起因;
2.與書店交涉的經(jīng)過;
3.呼吁服務(wù)行業(yè)必須提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量。
A Letter to the Editor of a Newspaper
11. (04. 1) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.有些大學(xué)校園浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象日益嚴(yán)重;
2.浪費(fèi)的危害;
3.杜絕浪費(fèi)，從我做起。 二)考試題型分類
[考試題型分類]
1、觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型考題(2次)
2、問題解決型考題(5次)
3、應(yīng)用文(3次)
4、應(yīng)用文(1次)
1、觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型考題
(08. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.隨著信息技術(shù)的發(fā)展，電子圖書越來越多。
2.有人認(rèn)為電子圖書會(huì)取代傳統(tǒng)圖書，理由是……
3.我的看法。
(07. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.有人做好事期望得到回報(bào);
2.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該像雷鋒那樣做好事不圖回報(bào);
3.我的觀點(diǎn)。
2、問題解決型考題
(08. 12) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How to Improve Students’ Mental Health? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1. 大學(xué)生的心理健康非常重要
2. 為此，學(xué)校可以
3. 我們自己應(yīng)當(dāng)
(06. 12) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.閱讀經(jīng)典書籍對(duì)人的成長至關(guān)重要;
2.現(xiàn)在愿意閱讀經(jīng)典的人卻越來越少，原因是……
3.我們大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。
(05. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.目前盜版的現(xiàn)象比較嚴(yán)重;
2.造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因及其危害;
3.我們應(yīng)該怎么做。
Useful words and expressions:
盜版：piracy (n.)
盜版產(chǎn)品：pirated products
知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)：intellectual property rights
侵犯版權(quán)：infringe sb’s copyright; copyright infringement
(04. 1) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.有些大學(xué)校園浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象日益嚴(yán)重;
2.浪費(fèi)的危害;
3.杜絕浪費(fèi)，從我做起。
問題解決型試題的變體
(07. 12) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Digital Age. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.如今數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品得到越來越廣泛的使用，例如……
2.數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品的使用對(duì)人們工作、學(xué)習(xí)和生活產(chǎn)生的影響。
3. 應(yīng)用文
(06. 1) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1.對(duì)公司提供職位表示感謝
2.解釋為何不能接受所提供的職位
3.希望給與諒解，并表達(dá)對(duì)公司的良好祝愿
(05. 1) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an open letter on behalf of the student union asking people to give help to a student who is seriously ill. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.對(duì)病人的簡單介紹：目前的病情和家庭情況;
2.目前的困難：無法繼續(xù)承擔(dān)醫(yī)療費(fèi)用，需要護(hù)理;
3.希望捐助，聯(lián)系方式。
(04. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the editor of a newspaper complaining about the poor service of a bookstore. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
設(shè)想你買了一本英文詞典，發(fā)現(xiàn)有這樣那樣的質(zhì)量問題，書店的服務(wù)態(tài)度又不好，因此給報(bào)社編輯寫信。信中必須包括以下內(nèi)容：
1.事情的起因;
2.與書店交涉的經(jīng)過;
3.呼吁服務(wù)行業(yè)必須提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量。
4. 圖表題
(06. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Traveling Abroad. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.近十年來X市有越來越多的人選擇出境旅游;
2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因;
3.這種現(xiàn)象可能產(chǎn)生的影響。 |
