同等學力英語作文批改：第7期

　　同等學力英語作文原文：

　　My View on Reform of Medical Care in China.

　　When it comes to medical care in china, we know there are many problems. In these problems, the higher cost and the diffculty to see a doctor are the important ones. What is the reason? With the development of society and the advancement of people’s stander of living, the old system can’t adpate it. It is emergency to reform it.

　　In my opinion, first, our country need cost more money in medical care and built more public hospital, in order that every patient can be cured. Second, we can built some high stander hospital to offter some special people. Third, we must promote doctor’s technology and reduce drug price.

　　If we work hard, I believe we will be a good tomorrow.

　　老師評語：4-6分

　　該文在內容上大致完成了寫作要求，可以明白作者的寫作意圖。但是，語言功底比較薄弱，有較多的語法錯誤，比如名詞復數、動詞的正確使用等。

　　建議在今后的語言學習中，打牢語法基礎，多加研讀精美篇章，從中學習地道的英文表達。