以下還是我的美國朋友寫的一篇例文,這片文章是關于環境保護的,寫的還不錯,很具借鑒價值的!
申明一點,老外寫文章也不是每篇都寫的好的(就像中國人寫中文文章也不是都寫的好的),也會受題目內容的影響,所以有的文章大家還是要持學習和批判的雙重目的來看的.
下面這篇個人認為,還屬于他寫給我的不錯的一篇.
The issue of environmental protection is becoming too big and far-reaching for individuals and any single nation to handle. Therefore, the issue can only be addressed from an international or global perspective. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The issue of environmental protection is becoming too large and far-reaching for individuals or any single nation to handle. Some believe therefore that the issue can only be addressed from an international or global perspective.（還是他犯的老錯誤，brief introduction部分絕對不能照抄原題！否則要扣分，大家這點千萬要搞清楚，不能被誤導了） As is the case with any issue having global impact however, and the elimination of the individual， the solution is highly debatable.
The actions of a single individual can do nothing to curb the swelling avalanche of environmental pollution overtaking our world.（紅色部分為主題句，下同） A single nation as well, depending on its individual contribution to global pollution can not make much of a difference acting alone against such a large problem. If the people of one nation were to entirely stop all forms of pollution this very day, it would still make only an infinitesimal difference in the scheme of things. A world lead by an organization encouraging reform however could spur real change but this organization cannot bring itself into being.
Change always starts small. A single individual while powerless alone has the ability to influence others and a group of people large enough and with a singular voice has the power to influence a nation. Likewise, influential nations acting in concert have the power to effect global change. The key to bringing about this chain reaction is engendering a consciousness and sense of responsibility toward the environment in a sufficient number of individuals; individuals who are not interested in stopping global pollution itself, but ensuring a healthy environment for themselves and their own progeny. People are the driving force of change.
Individuals must learn to appreciate the problem of global pollution on a personal level before they can take true responsibility for it. Assigning this responsibility to a global organization, while lending organization and clear direction to the solution, only further removes people from the problem.
請注意,這位老兄的思想我想不是每個人都理解的(有些地方我看的也無語了),所以我們要明白一點,我請老外寫文章不是要看他的結構和內容(這個我相信中國人絕對不比他們差),我們要學的是他的語言!有些句型和詞匯,我們可能看的懂,但永遠想不到用,這才是我們最要借鑒的地方!!! |
